Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday 11 May 2020
How to make a book
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Hi Tai
ReplyDeleteI really like your instructions on how to make a book. I like how you have numbered all your steps to make the instructions easy to follow. My favourite bit is your goal, it is a great idea to write a goal as it gives you something to work towards. It would be cool to know what your story is about.
Sarah
Kia Ora Tai,
ReplyDeleteWell done with your writing. I like how you included pictures to go with your step by step instructions. Your next step is to add more detail to your instructions so they are specific.
What do you like to write about?
Miss Hart
ive edited my instructions.
Deletewow great job a you going to make books and sell them for money?
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