Friday 24 April 2020

My war parcel


The items in my Redcross parcel are soap, chicken chips, beer, wine, beans, a puzzle, warm jersey, boots and a fridge.
I chose these things because they would be more helpful in the war , and i have put in fun stuff for them when they defeat the enemies.

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4 comments:

  1. Sarah28 April 2020 at 10:07

    Hi Tai
    You have put a lot of thought into your Red Cross parcel. A warm jersey and boots would have really helped the soldiers keep warm and a puzzle would be great to keep the soldiers busy when they were not in battle.
    Sarah

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  2. Miss Hart29 April 2020 at 11:10

    Kia Ora Tai,

    I like the detail you have in your picture. I can see you have put a lot of thought into your red cross parcel, you have thought of lots of practical items for the soldiers. If you had a one, what would you want in your parcel?

    Miss Hart

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    1. Anonymous30 April 2020 at 09:50

      i would wont my tv and xbox one.

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    2. Miss Hart1 May 2020 at 13:31

      Kia Ora Tai,

      thank you for your reply. I wonder if you would be able to plug it in? I would probably want a sleeping bag or something to keep me warm and lots of chocolate. When you write replies, you want to address the person you are replying to e.g. Hi Sarah.

      Miss Hart

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